Here are my thoughts after viewing the sample critique slides:
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Slide 1: The main strengths in this slide are the colour scheme used, which effects harmony, as well as the large font size used. In addition, the slide is easy to read and understand, because firstly, the lettering has been contrasted with the background by the use of dark colours, thus making the words easy to see and read, and there is less than 8 lines of text. I also like the fact that narration and audio have been incorporated into this slide, and they are clear, pleasant and easy to understand.
However, improvements could be made to the layout of the slide, for there is a lack of balance in the organization of the graphic and text elements. Also, I feel that the instruction ”Click on the buttons to learn more” should be at the top of the slide, instead of being the last line which may be very confusing to the students. The audio elements used should be the same as well. Furthermore, there are more than 2 types of lettering styles used (Adept, Tempus Sans ITC and Times New Roman), which can be very distracting to the students.
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Slide 2: The strengths in this slide are the use of photgraphs to introduce the two types of frogs as students might not have seen these species before. The lettering size is also large enough for good visibility. There is a good balance in the layout of the slide as well.
However, though photographs have been used, they could be made bigger so that they are more visible to the students. Also, this slide is too cluttered with words, for there are more than 8 lines of text; this makes the slide difficult to read and understand. Furthermore, the transitional effect is too distracting; the sound effect is heard for each word of the text and it can be quite annoying.
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Slide 3: The strengths of this slide are the use of a flowchart to simplify the life cycle of a frog, which can be easily understood. However, I feel that too many directional arrows have been sued which can be quite distracting. Also, upper case lettering is being used in the instructional text and this can slow down the students’ reading speed considerably as well.
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Slide 4: The strengths in this slide are that only 2 lettering styles are used (Arial and Arial Black), the large lettering size and colour, and less than 8 lines of text.
However, the layout of the slide is imbalanced, and there is excessive use of the text animations which can divert the students’ attention. Also, there is picture (of a frog sticking out its tongue) at the bottom left corner which is too distracting. The spacing between the lines is also too close.
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Slide 5: The strengths in this slide are the layout of the slide, which is informally balanced, making the slide interesting and dynamice. Also, there is again an excellent use of only 2 lettering styles, lettering size and colour.
However, this slide is too cluttered with words, since there are more than 8 lines of text. This is further aggravated by the close spacing between the text, which makes it even more difficult to see and read the text. Also, this slide is inconsistent with the other slides in that the graphic elements (for “forward”, “home” and ”back”) are placed at the top of the slide instead of at the bottom right corner.
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Slide 6: The strengths in this slide are the use of only 2 types of lettering styles, lettering size and colour. However, again, this slide is too cluttered with words in that there are more than 8 lines of text, and the spacing between the lines is too close. There is also a lack of balance in the layout of this slide.
Overall, this sample critique slide has its strengths such as the good use of lettering styles, size and colour, colour scheme, narration and sound effects, however, there is definitely room for improvement. Since IT-based presentations are becoming increasingly common in todays’ classrooms, it is imperative that teachers master the principles of creating an effective IT presentation for effective teaching.